The Altitude of Bad Timing


By the time Marcus realized he was in love with the woman in seat 14B, the plane had already reached cruising altitude and he had spilled tomato juice on himself twice.

This was statistically impossible.

Marcus was the kind of man who walked through life as if background music followed him. He knew how to enter rooms. He knew how to shake hands, flirt lightly, tell stories that landed, and smile like he had secrets worth learning. Nervousness usually kept a respectful distance.

Then she sat down beside him wearing mismatched socks, noise-canceling headphones around her neck, and the expression of someone who had accidentally joined the wrong species.

She dropped three pens, apologized to the armrest, then buckled the seatbelt wrong.

Marcus, who had once negotiated a car price down by four thousand dollars without blinking, forgot how seatbelts worked too.

“You’re sitting on the strap,” she said softly.

“I’m testing it,” he replied.

“Ah.”

She accepted this nonsense with a nod so sincere it made him sweat.

Outside the window, the city glittered beneath them like spilled jewelry. Roads glowed in branching veins of gold. Clouds moved like old ghosts over neighborhoods neither of them knew. The wing cut through the dark with a calm Marcus deeply resented.

He tried conversation.

“Business or vacation?”

She considered this for a long moment. “Avoidance.”

He laughed too loudly.

She winced. “Sorry. That was honest. I forget people usually lie first.”

Her name was Lena. She designed museum exhibits and disliked elevators, fluorescent lighting, and phrases like networking opportunity. She said airports smelled like stress and cinnamon. She talked with the stop-start rhythm of someone whose mind ran faster than language. With most people, she admitted, conversation felt like assembling furniture with missing screws.

But with Marcus, words came easier.

She told him about the time she accidentally joined a birdwatching group because she thought it was brunch. He told her about getting trapped in a revolving door while trying to look cool. She snorted so suddenly soda came out her nose.

“I hate that I did that in front of you,” she said.

“I hate that I find it adorable,” he said before consulting his brain.

She stared.

Marcus considered opening the emergency exit and starting over.

Instead, she smiled—small, crooked, dangerous.

“Good,” she said. “Because I was worried I was weirding you out.”

“You are,” he said. “But in a way that feels medically significant.”

The turbulence hit then, sharp and brief. Lena grabbed his hand without thinking. Her fingers were cold. His pulse became a percussion section.

Neither let go when the plane steadied.

Below them, the city kept glowing—millions of lights, each one a tiny proof that people were fumbling toward one another in the dark.

When they landed, Marcus would miss his connecting flight on purpose.

Lena, who usually fled human interaction like a housecat avoiding taxes, would wait with him for the next one.

Sometimes love doesn’t arrive with violins.

Sometimes it arrives at 34,000 feet, smelling faintly of recycled air and tomato juice.



Discover more from Memoirs of Madness

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.

4 thoughts on “The Altitude of Bad Timing

  1. If you need me to produce this as a Netflix series – give me a call. I smell Emmy.

    You know I adore your writing but this…it has wings. No pun intended. ❤️

    Like

Leave a reply to Covert Novelist Cancel reply