Part VII of the Spiral Series

The breach wasn’t what drew them this time.

She was.

Carla had felt it—long before the cliffs came into view, before the wind shifted, before the sky’s texture flattened into stillness. This wasn’t the usual Spiral pull. It didn’t lure or prod. It didn’t hum.

It watched.

She moved cautiously over the dry bluff, boots scuffing loose rock. The sea glittered far below in the late-afternoon haze, fractured sunlight spreading across its shimmering surface like a spill of silver threads. Wind carried no salt, only dust and a faint tang of rusted metal.

The silence was complete. Even her own breath felt out of place.

—

She found the camp carved into the slope of a cliffside ridge—subtle, deliberate, too symmetrical to be a coincidence. Four tents. One cold fire. A cracked solar dish half-embedded in a shallow crater.

Three figures sat near the ash pit, eyes already on her.

“You’re late,” said one. Calm. As if she had kept them waiting for something that had already happened.

—

They called themselves The Stayers.

Not cultists. Not travelers. Former closers like her. People who once twisted artifacts and left scorched geometry in their wake.

Now they did nothing.

“The Spiral feeds on choice,” said the woman with the burned throat. “Sealing. Opening. Doubting. It doesn’t care. It just counts motion.”

“So we don’t move,” said the old man. “We stay. That’s the only defiance it doesn’t know how to shape.”

Carla crouched by the fire pit. The scent of dry grass and melted plastic lingered. Spiral symbols were scratched into the stone around the perimeter—faint, deliberate, and concentric.

“Doing nothing is still a decision,” she said. “It’s still a shape.”

“Maybe,” said the woman. “But it’s a simple one.”

—

They told her stories late into the night.

One claimed a breach in Greenland had reversed a river’s current for seven years. Another swore that one seal had erased an entire language from the minds of the people who spoke it. The old man said nothing. Just stared into the ashes, lips twitching now and then in silent repetition—a mantra too quiet to catch.

Carla listened.

She wasn’t sure if they were lying. Or if truth had started to drift from language entirely.

Above, the sky stretched starry and sharp. One constellation spiraled outward with uncanny symmetry—an unnatural twist she hadn’t seen before.

She didn’t sleep. The camp felt airless. Not from lack of oxygen—just lack of time.

—

Hours passed.

She stayed by the embers.

That’s when he came.

A young man—quiet, deliberate, barefoot. No weapon. No coat. His tunic was worn thin and hand-stitched with spiral thread. He moved as if he were afraid to ripple the air.

“You’re not like them,” Carla said.

“Not anymore,” he replied. His voice was careful, almost polite. “I’m Esh.”

He sat beside her, close but not quite touching.

“You came with someone,” she guessed.

He nodded.

“My sister. She believed. Said she heard the Spiral speaking through frequencies. Radio static. Drips in the stream. She followed it here.”

“What happened to her?”

“She went deeper.” He looked at his hands, “Stopped eating. Stopped speaking. One day, she walked into the breach and didn’t come out.”

Carla tensed.

“There’s a breach nearby?”

“Not anymore,” he said. “The tower replaced it.”

—

They sat in silence for a while. The fire had died down, but heat still pulsed in the stones.

Esh leaned forward, tracing a spiral into the ash with one finger.

Carla pulled off her glove and placed her marked palm beside it. The glow from her skin lit the spiral like embers reawakening.

“It’s not random,” he said. “It’s a pattern. And the more we act, the more it learns. You twist, it adapts. You seal, it shifts. You feel like you’re resisting, but maybe you’re just… rehearsing.”

“Then why stay?” she asked.

He didn’t answer right away.

“Because it wants us to move. To respond. That’s how it grows. And the Stayers believe that if they just wait, it’ll shrink. Or forget them.”

“And you?”

“I think that’s cowardice disguised as wisdom.”

—

His eyes flicked toward her mark.

“You still feel like yourself?”

“Mostly,” she lied.

“Good,” he said. “Because when it stops feeling foreign, that’s when you should worry.”

—

Later, he walked her to the edge of camp. A soft breeze rolled over the bluff. The sky had begun to warm—not true dawn, just a faint silvering of the clouds.

“I dream in spirals now,” he said. “And I don’t think they’re dreams. I think it’s downloading us, piece by piece.”

“Why are you telling me this?”

“Because I can’t leave. Every time I try, I wake up here. In the same spot. Same sunny wind. Same sky.”

He touched the spiral mark on his chest—faded, scarred over.

“But you… You’re still moving. You’re still free.”

He pressed something into her hand. A flat stone, smooth as glass.

“Keep it,” he said. “So you remember you’re not one of us.”

—

By morning, the camp was gone.

No tents. No ashes. No tracks.

Only the stone remained—flat, palm-sized, spiral-carved.

And on its back, one word etched in ragged lines:

Start.

—

The Spiral was no longer hiding.

As Carla moved west, the terrain felt engineered. Heat rose not from sunlight but from beneath. The ground didn’t crack—it shifted. Like skin twitching in response to touch.

The cliff dropped suddenly.

Below: the tower.

Not built.

Grown.

Smooth, seamless, pulsing with soft light. Like it had been waiting underground, and the world had finally aligned to let it through.

Carla’s knees weakened.

A voice—not hers—whispered behind her thoughts:

Let me help you carry the rest.

She stepped forward.

The Spiral wasn’t mimicking her anymore.
It was practice.

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Author’s Note:
This chapter was written incorporating Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie #429. Three episodes remain—stay tuned as the Spiral begins to speak.